Analysis of Insincere sencerities



~Insincere sincerities~
Written: 08 May 2020

Hush now with your empty hyperbole's
Your over exaggerated understatements
Your sincere insincerityjust insults me
and abates any wanton gravitation.

How can you miss or want
Long and love this fallen goddess
Be so ever pompously blunt
to think I am nothing more than not modest

I will not deny my peiced together beauty
deny everything I broke in me for this strength
I owe you no stories of the times I put my wants below duty
or to tell tale of the days my heart broke more with every breath

I am poetry shouted over mountains
that echo back with whispers
I am storms and I am sunshine
I am wine that only with age gets crisper

So don't you undermine me
with praise you assume I so do crave
I am not misguided to believe words recited on key
by many man who think me naive

You're the insincere ones
who only care far enough to find the rabbit hole
the ones with honey coated thorned tongues
Touching the surface but never wanting the soul

The predators disguised as good men
they preach and shout a top thier soap boxes
The hungry fox who stalks the injured hen
As playing victim in all thier paradoxes

So hush now my hungry hunter
and go track a less instinctual prey
beneath your disguise only a suntar
who will feed on the weak without delay.

Dont insult with denied pretense
or try intimidate me with passive anger
my experienced heartbreak is my defense
and believe me I'm not the one in danger.


Scheme AB AACX XAXX CXCX AAXD CXCX AEAE FAFA DBDB ADAD
Poetic Form
Metre 011 101 1111101 11001001 1011011 0011010010 111111 10111010 111011 11111011110 111011101010 01101101111 11111010111110110 1111101111111001 11100101010 1101110 1110111 11111011110 111101 111011111 111010101101011 11011111 10011 1101101110101 011101011 100101101001 010001111 11010110110 0101110101 110100110100 11111010 0110111 011011001 1111010101 10110101 11010111010 1010011101 00111101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,459
Words 280
Sentences 3
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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~Insincere sincerities~ Written: 08 May 2020 Hush now with your empty hyperbole's Your over exaggerated understatements Your sincere insincerityjust insults me and abates any wanton gravitation. How can you miss or want Long and love this fallen goddess Be so ever pompously blunt to think I am nothing more than not modest I will not deny my peiced together beauty deny everything I broke in me for this strength I owe you no stories of the times I put my wants below duty or to tell tale of the days my heart broke more with every breath I am poetry shouted over mountains that echo back with whispers I am storms and I am sunshine I am wine that only with age gets crisper So don't you undermine me with praise you assume I so do crave I am not misguided to believe words recited on key by many man who think me naive You're the insincere ones who only care far enough to find the rabbit hole the ones with honey coated thorned tongues Touching the surface but never wanting the soul The predators disguised as good men they preach and shout a top thier soap boxes The hungry fox who stalks the injured hen As playing victim in all thier paradoxes So hush now my hungry hunter and go track a less instinctual prey beneath your disguise only a suntar who will feed on the weak without delay. Dont insult with denied pretense or try intimidate me with passive anger my experienced heartbreak is my defense and believe me I'm not the one in danger. 

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Written on May 08, 2020

Submitted by Loner_Lulu on May 07, 2024

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