Analysis of THE LAST HOPE (Kauaʻi ʻōʻō)



i call your name,
i beg for a little solace.

my song echoes through the trees.
i wait for life to be chanted.

the hollow forest answers with silence.

the mute wind caresses the last, drifting feather of hope.

i hear my voice coming back:
one final string of air, gasping your name.

the world shut me down like a lonely,
flickering light at the dusk of time.

do not weep for me.

we will reunite once again,
swiftly spreading our wings in the unlimited blue.


Scheme AX XX X X XA BX B XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11101010 1110101 11111110 0101010110 01101001101011 1111101 1101111011 011111010 100110111 11111 1101101 10101010001001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 471
Words 105
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

The Kauaʻi ʻōʻō is a bird species that went extinct in the 80s. The male's beautiful song should be answered by the female's, yet no specimens were left: in the last recording (which you can find on YouTube), the pauses should be filled by the female's answer.

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Written on October 13, 2023

Submitted by kaimitchell on October 14, 2023

Modified by kaimitchell on October 14, 2023

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