Rain to mitigate my upsetting mind.



Rain to mitigate my upsetting mind.

The first shower came
as blessings to them.
They were mitigating their thrust
and were drenching like children
as if they were playing game.

They were the trees
standing on an open.
Through an open window,
i was enjoying the views.

My feverish brain,getting comfort
and my upsetting mind knew,
the soothing scenic beauty,
would remove the doubt.

Suddenly I remembered my hay days,
when I found the silvery rain drops,
like thousands of silvery coins.

The sudden thundering,lightning
made me frightened
and i rushed to my house
which made me crying.

Now my heart is desert
and eyes are dried.
Seeking for rain,
tears in my eyes
and repose in heart.
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Submitted by swarupbhattacharya263 on May 05, 2024

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Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 4, 3, 4, 5

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