Analysis of Rain to mitigate my upsetting mind.



Rain to mitigate my upsetting mind.

The first shower came
as blessings to them.
They were mitigating their thrust
and were drenching like children
as if they were playing game.

They were the trees
standing on an open.
Through an open window,
i was enjoying the views.

My feverish brain,getting comfort
and my upsetting mind knew,
the soothing scenic beauty,
would remove the doubt.

Suddenly I remembered my hay days,
when I found the silvery rain drops,
like thousands of silvery coins.

The sudden thundering,lightning
made me frightened
and i rushed to my house
which made me crying.

Now my heart is desert
and eyes are dried.
Seeking for rain,
tears in my eyes
and repose in heart.


Scheme X AXXBA XBXX CXXX XXX DXXD CXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111010101 01101 11011 1010011 0010110 1110101 1001 101110 111010 1101001 1100110 0101011 0101010 10101 1001010111 111010011 11011001 0101 1110 011111 11110 111110 0111 1011 1011 00101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 690
Words 142
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 4, 3, 4, 5
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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