Message in a bottle
There, there it is again,
Gentle, like two lovers finding each others skin for the first time,
Grabbing at my hands blind,,
And slowly engulfing the entirety of my arms,rising each hair ,
To share a cool whisper
Then vanishing through me
As if I were, what they call “invisible”
The wind
The same in all seasons, reliable, dangerous,
I hear what it says , when it shakes the bush,
When the brittle branches of the olive tree next to my abandoned house rain
I listen,
when it ruffles and fluffs the sunbirds feathers, the bird whose nest had blessed my window pane
each summer growing up.
I listen,
Sometimes it says nothing at all,
Sometimes the silence is so palpable,
you could pick it off of the wild olive trees and swallow it whole.
These were the kinds of days where heartbeats were as loud as thunderstorms ,
Where a single step could disintegrate a home into splinters,
Where bullets could pass through thin air like shattered glass.
But today, today is not one of these days.
Today, there are wishes brought from bottles
Bottles brought from waves
Waves brought from somewhere the wind hasn’t touched yet.
About this poem
With turmoil and war plaguing the world, I felt,as many do, helpless and deeply empathizing with those whose world looks dramatically different than my own. This poem is in light of the Palestinian war whose casualties have hit nearly 20,000 people. The perspective of this work is from a young Palestinian girl. The wind, which is unreliable is meant to act as a metaphor for finding hope.
Written on March 27, 2024
Submitted by altraveler2000 on March 27, 2024
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | xxxxxxa bxcDcxD xaxxbx xxxx |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,146 |
Words | 220 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 7, 6, 4 |
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