I Dared

Subas Bista 1976 (Bhojpur)



Dared

your smile black lady
reminds me of shakespeare
if he were here;he would create
a sonnet for you dear
but i am an ordinary being
i just can write words a few
in these seven long years
you are always new
when you pass by
i go into a trance
when you are gone
wildly i dance
if i were only keats..i would really say
a thing of beauty is joy for ever
but i am an ordinary sepherd
i can write verses never
some times i feel
i call you for tea
and just tell you
how much i love thee
but i am an ordinary folk
you are a princess bold
sorry for the venture
"i love you" i last told

About this poem

I was thinking about the black lady of Shakespeare and wrote this.

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Submitted by subasbista on October 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGFHIJIKLALMAFANOLO
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 582
Words 129
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

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