Analysis of I Dared

Subas Bista 1976 (Bhojpur)



your smile black lady
reminds me of shakespeare
if he were here;he would create
a sonnet for you dear
but i am an ordinary being
i just can write words a few
in these seven long years
you are always new
when you pass by
i go into a trance
when you are gone
wildly i dance
if i were only keats..i would really say
a thing of beauty is joy for ever
but i am an ordinary sepherd
i can write verses never
some times i feel
i call you for tea
and just tell you
how much i love thee
but i am an ordinary folk
you are a princess bold
sorry for the venture
"i love you" i last told


Scheme ABCDEFGFHIJIKLALMAFANOLO
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 01111 1101101 010111 111110010 1111101 011011 1111 1111 110101 1111 1011 1101011101 0111011110 11111001 1111010 1111 11111 0111 11111 11111001 110101 101010 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 582
Words 129
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 446
Words per stanza (avg) 123

About this poem

I was thinking about the black lady of Shakespeare and wrote this.

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Submitted by subasbista on October 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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