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I deserve love

Affan Ali 2002 (Samastipur)

Elegy
I deserve love
We deserve love
I love you to the moon
I love you more than me
I love you till the end

I deserve love
We deserve love
Stop pushing away
Stop creating distan
Stop comparing thin
Stop complaining mun

I deserve love
We deserve love
Learn to love
Earn the love
Seek the love
Make the love

I deserve love
We deserve love
Ease the pain
Ease the insecurity
Be the bravest
Be mine be mine

About this poem

I was in a toxic relationship where every time I tried to love her she always pushes me back and she use to say things that broke my heart and then I wrote this poem while i was crying at 3 am .

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Written on August 24, 2022

Submitted by abbukhan2002 on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAbcx AAxbxx AAaaaa AAxcxx
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 403
Words 87
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 6, 6
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Affan Ali

I am a college student studying Economics and i like to write poems and all my poems are written will so much emotions and feelings that you can understand by my poems only. I write what i feel. more…

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