Analysis of I deserve love

Affan Ali 2002 (Samastipur)



I deserve love
We deserve love
I love you to the moon
I love you more than me
I love you till the end

I deserve love
We deserve love
Stop pushing away
Stop creating distan
Stop comparing thin
Stop complaining mun

I deserve love
We deserve love
Learn to love
Earn the love
Seek the love
Make the love

I deserve love
We deserve love
Ease the pain
Ease the insecurity
Be the bravest
Be mine be mine


Scheme AAbcx AAxbxx AAaaaa AAxcxx
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1011 111101 111111 111101 1011 1011 11001 10101 10101 10101 1011 1011 111 101 101 101 1011 1011 101 100100 1010 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 403
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I was in a toxic relationship where every time I tried to love her she always pushes me back and she use to say things that broke my heart and then I wrote this poem while i was crying at 3 am .

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Written on August 24, 2022

Submitted by abbukhan2002 on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I am a college student studying Economics and i like to write poems and all my poems are written will so much emotions and feelings that you can understand by my poems only. I write what i feel. more…

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