Analysis of TIME TRAVEL



I wish I had a flux capacitor,
Or understood Quantum Physics,
Flying in a Tardis to wherever the pain started,
Leading to life’s decision being inverted,
I would have warned my younger self of all those emotional bricks,
That no one is a friend but everyone is a traitor.

I wish I had 1.21 gigawatts of power,
And could accelerate to 88 miles per hour,
Speed and power enough to stop life turning sour,
I would get my younger avatar out of the security tower,
Giving emotions colour, than the reality of them being dull and dour,
Not having to wish away all regrets under the weight of the water from the shower.

Tired of the daleks, cybermen and bad wolf that reside in his mind,
Making him realise that the attitude problem was not his but of the enemy,
That shouting out isnt a sign of disrespect.
To remove the lies and take off the scarf to make him unblind,
To realise that there is nothing wrong with his identity,
And give him the tools, so he has the power of his life to direct

If I had the knowledge, I would have the ability to go back in the blink of a cosmic clock,
Reverse time to have the ability to live without a mental lock,
Letting those voices escape,
Instead being a superhero in his story but without a cape,
I would be the hologram to guide my younger self,
Making sure that they dont grow up to feel like a skelf


Scheme ABCXBA AAAAAA XDECDE FFGGHH
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010100 1011010 1000110100110 101101010010 1111110111101001 1111011101010 11111110 0101011110 1010011111010 11111010110010010 100101101011101010 1101101101100110101010 101011011101011 1011101010111110100 1101101101 10101011011111 11111101110100 01101111010111101 1110101110010011100110101 011110010011010101 1011001 01100010011010101 111010111101 1011111111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,343
Words 282
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 264
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted by 1YASER on February 01, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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