First Draft Afternoon II
The reds and browns of autumn's dying leaves
Show through church windows with their stained glass
I look at my brothers lifeless body
The corners of his mouth formed to a smile
I expect him to jump with a laugh
Rapping his knuckles on my skull
Saying come on squirt lets go play some ball...
You'll get sixty points play to a hundred
I recall the days out on the lake
Sitting in his rowboat while he would row
Always his rear to wind sometimes he'd pull
Other days he would then push the oars
Like green leaves in the summer fade to red
Fall came too soon for this life filled red head
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Submitted on August 26, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | XXXX XXXX XXXX AA |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 585 |
Words | 114 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 2 |
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