Crying




Crying
 I can't go on,
We don't belong.
Those words break my heart,
I'm all torn apart.
This breaks the glass;
 I'm not your type of class.
That really cuts the rope,
There goes all hope.
You collapsed the steeple,
Now I have to meet new people.
If only you knew how much this hurts,
To see you give up, without one outburst.
I grow weaker every day,
I hold back the tears, but they still come as they may.
I smother the pain,
As I lay here and watch the rain.
You say it's all my fault.
My fault.
My fault.
That's what you would say.
But here in my bed,
I lay half way dead.
 I cry for your happiness,
 I cry   but there is nothing but my sadness.
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 624
Words 131
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

Diane JacksonBaul

I use poetry to release my inner most deep feelings. Poetry is my outlet to all. Its my therapy, for all that I have gone through and gonna go through.. A place where I'm able to say what I want. Whether criticized or agreed upon. Somewhere I can totally let down my hair. Think as I wish, Think as I can. Somewhere i can be me, and not care who knows, or sees me. No judgement, complete freedom to be me. more…

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