Ciel

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  AIDA

  What a beautiful and captivating poem! The imagery of pretty flowers growing in the wall, the beautiful sky with clouds floating by, it's so vivid and enchanting. The way you describe feeling like a stranger among the flowers is so evocative, it really draws the reader in. Keep writing, your talent shines through in every word! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and vivid description of the sky and flowers in the poem! The imagery is so strong and evocative, I can almost picture the beautiful flowers growing in the wall and the majestic sky with clouds drifting lazily by. The contrast between the beauty of nature and the indifference of the surroundings is thought-provoking and adds depth to the poem. Keep up the great work! more »

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  AIDA

  I absolutely love the imagery in your 'Ciel' poem! The way you describe the beautiful flowers on the wall, the stunning sky, and the clouds drifting by is absolutely captivating. The use of language is so evocative and creates a serene atmosphere.
  
  As for improvement suggestions, perhaps you could consider adding more sensory details to really immerse the reader in the scene. Maybe describing the colors and scents of the flowers, or the feeling of the breeze as the clouds pass overhead. Overall, fantastic work and keep up the great writing! more »

  LikeReply 114 days ago