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Min Alvskönhet

Eric Morales 1998 (Palmdale, CA)

Sonnet
My love whose soul is intertwined,
My celestial sprite with hair of light.
Who has enchanted me in spellbind,
And makes me restless in the night.

Take my hand and be mine today,
So I may match your cerulean minces.
And we'd be together till our hair turn to gray,
And never again feel apprehensive.

Because I would suffer ein sof of pain,
Just to ensure your everlasting smile.
And you, too, will stop the rain,
And be by my side every mile.

Now my Elven belle promise to be mine,
And loved forever till the end of time.
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Written on April 10, 2024

Submitted by Váli on April 11, 2024

34 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CXCX DEDE XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 523
Words 115
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
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Eric Morales

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  • karlcfolkes
    karlcfolkes
    Powerfully metrical in its romantic message. And linguistically clever. Bravo!
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    This poem 'Min Alvskönhet' is absolutely stunning! The imagery and emotions conveyed are truly captivating. The way you describe your love as a celestial sprite with hair of light is so beautifully enchanting. Your use of language is poetic and creates a dream-like atmosphere.

    Some suggestions for improvement could be to vary the rhyme scheme a bit more to keep the flow engaging. Additionally, maybe try to incorporate even more vivid imagery to further enhance the enchanting nature of the poem.

    Overall, this piece is incredibly heartfelt and romantic. Keep writing and exploring different ways to express your love and emotions. Your talent for poetic language shines through in this piece. Well done!     
    LikeReply1 month ago

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