A Moment of Blessed Curse



An acquainted face seen a hundred times
Not all the while had he once caught my eye
One day, afflicted by Her touch was I
Before me set a path I could not climb

A quick hand wave, and when he turned to me
The strangest feeling struck me suddenly
His gaze a lock from which I could not flee
Not that I would, my mind so fully seized

Oh like a jolt of electricity
Did sudden longing then wash over me
To stay there in his stare
Much more that I would share
Lost in the haze of this felicity

He turns to go, there’s nothing more to see
I cannot follow; turn to my own things
Oh make that moment last!
My heart would seek to ask
Aphrodite, what have you done to me?

About this poem

Trying my hand at a round of iamic p... verse structure is a bit improvised (I guess the closest form would be ballad; tho this one is pretty short). :)

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Written on March 23, 2024

Submitted by NoVaDaydreamer on March 27, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAAX BBBX BBCCB BXXXB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 667
Words 140
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5

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