Just a thought



Do you feel so lost?
Do you feel my pain?
Can you sleep at night?
Or do you lie in chains?
Are you trapped by the things
That scream in your head?
And you trapped by the one
Who you’ll love till you’re dead?
Do you feel for their soul
When yours is cold?
Do you look to the sky
In search of their eyes?
Do you really want sleep
or do you just want to die?

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Everyone loses someone they love, some move on, and some don’t. And I never will.

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Submitted by aa_pluzzz on March 19, 2024

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Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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