Too Late



Rays of sun glimmer like diamonds on the waves
Kissing my skin all over, so softly
I close my eyes so everything fades
Imagining the warmth as strong arms to hold me

Strong winds surround my listless soul
Twirling, spiraling, twisting, and smothering
Is this life my friend, or is it my foe
I’m basking in the essence of this eternity

The thoughts are too loud
Like thunder striking bold
As if I’m floating on clouds
Suffocating in the mold

I’m reaching, grabbing, desperately holding on
Don’t leave me yet, I’m still not ready
I don’t want to open my eyes because then you’ll be gone
I give myself to the count of three
 
It’s too late

About this poem

Just words that were swirling around my head. I wrote them on my father's birthday, grieving the loss of him after 2 years

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Written on June 11, 2023

Submitted by abcampbell on June 11, 2023

Modified by abcampbell on June 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XXXA XBXB XAXA X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 671
Words 137
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

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