The Sound Of It Breaking
Sarmad Wattoo 1994 (Bahawalnagar)
Shattered me a blow of your action
Stood still numb broken without any reaction
Thought what wrong did I do
threw me what did you
I love still my heart aches
You didn't come back my heart still awaits
I still look at you and smile with a sorrow
Loving you with such pain I had to borrow
I'm standing still do you even see
You wanted us to be one wasn't that we
I cry sometimes and I pray for you to be fine
I wipe my tears and say you wasn't meant to be mine
Indeed I fell and I fell so hard and deep
I ran out of tears to weep
Maybe one day you'll see what I was
You was the one who held my world in a pause
Maybe I wasn't good enough for your taste
I'm a human with feelings not a waste
I surrender yet I love this is what is going to be my fate
I'll wait another life another year another month another date
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Written on November 21, 2022
Submitted by wattoo23467 on April 12, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AA BB XX CC DD EE FF XX GG HH |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 837 |
Words | 198 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
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