Too much



She was holding immense pain in her sparkling eyes,
Her heart was filled with storms,
Wanting to be the best for everyone,
She crushed all her rules and norms.
She was fighting her demons
When she seemed gorgeous to everyone
But when she needed her real self to be understood
Guess who remained ? NONE!
She was a fighter , a believer
But no one acknowledged her as such
All she asked was some affection
Was she asking for too much?
Ko

About this poem

This poem depicts the feelings of a girl who has just ended her teens and is burdened with several expectations. These lines presents the real thoughts of somebody who wants everyone to be happy , but isn't happy herself.

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Written on January 18, 2022

Submitted by kritikaupadhyayupadhyay on January 18, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDCECFGCGH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 436
Words 88
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

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