We lost our ways



As by every passing tree,
Why it seems like though art agree?

You want to be asunder from me,
Believe me! You can bequeath, you will feel free.

You are a ship that sails in the ocean, And
I am a shore of that unwanted ocean.

You want to go with the flow, but
I want to be a burning fire that glow.

By seeing these dark, lonely trees,
Whom their leaves deceive them in breeze.

I reckon they are similar to me,
So shady but always alone and still never feel free.

But it’s alright as you are, agreed,
To be never a hemisphere of me, but

To thou, I do a plea, that
Never come back to me.

About this poem

It is a love poem which is showed through the eye of nature.A poem in which two lovers are aparting because they think they are not a perfect match for each other ,they have their own dreams to achieve.but still can’t leave each other.

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Written on October 27, 2022

Submitted by hafsa_a on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA AA XX BX CC AA XB XA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 593
Words 138
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Hafsa Asad

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