Reminiscent of Jeremy



If you cut me
Do I not bleed?
For your sympathy must I plead?
Such was the refrain of a 12-year-old
After abuses, untold
Perpetrated by his classmates
Just Tom-foolery, not hate
A teacher was told
The boys recieved a stern "scold"
But, a pattern would unfold
Their behavior uncontrolled
And so was the pain of a 12-year-old
After abuses, untold

He hated the gym
The worst place for picking on him
But, such is the life of a 12-year-old
Enduring abuses, untold
Knocked down from the monkey-bars
Now they've taken it too far
The principal must be told
The boy consoled
But his abusers became more bold
He was "trolled"
Increasing the shame of a 12-year-old
After abuses, untold

Reminiscent of "Jeremy"
No longer would he plead
A new game for this 13-year-old
After abuses, untold
Borrowing from their playbook
Brutal beatings he undertook
Empathy he would withhold
As sinews tighten
And muscles grow
Incarceration, release
Blow after blow
A back-alley hero
This is the story of a guy I know
And his abuses, untold

About this poem

After reading The Raven, I wanted to try the ABCBBB rhyme pattern. I found out that wasn't the secret to Poe's success (his talent was). Still, I like this rhyme scheme. I was thinking of a kid I teased in 6th grade. I still feel bad about it. Wondered if he turned out to be a badass. Luckily I grew out of that.

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Written on October 07, 2022

Submitted by rnadc on October 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abbcCxxcccccC ddccxxcccbcC abcCeecxfxfffc
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,014
Words 181
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 13, 12, 14

RUSSELL ANDERSON

Russell Anderson-raised in a small, remote, California town. He is now living out his later years in small-town Oregon. Still gets "Verklempt" by a good, sad song, poem, or testimonial. more…

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