Let it rain



Quite a gloomy day
The love of my life, came early today

The rain got its temper
To set the mode and pamper
Nobody, not even a grand-mommy’s bunny
So why not to snuggle, your soft little tummy

Oh it is getting cold now
You might not know-how
The soft cottons are all above
Just to mention, it’s not forbidden to love

Yeah you feel that tickle
As the touch goes with that nibble
Grab the babies you've got
And run all the way to where it is hot

The field got its moist and flow
Not to forget the sweet and sensual blow

Oh my pretty little love
The rain just stopped to make their bow
The field is dry and warm
But the bare double is lying till the dawn

The moist steamy breath, which flows
Over back and forth, is a pretty good show
Time to say we are good for today
And, until it rains next day

About this poem

The poem is all about a romantic encounter of a couple, on a rainy day.

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Written on November 09, 2021

Submitted by ashane2e on November 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BBCC DDEE FFGG HH EDXX XHAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 804
Words 167
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4

Ashane Edirisinghe

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