Analysis of At the Floodmark



Right on the line between flood and damp sand
you move slowly, with swirling wind entwined,
not knowing what to choose for, to which end
you should go and seek the kind peace of mind.
Your thinking seems like a sea, it won’t find
tranquility, just rolling back and forth
from bits of hope to waves of weary chords
that counteract. As long as this sea goes,
you see no way to proceed, only the wards
between what comes and the tracks of old blows.


Scheme ABCBBDEFEF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101011011 1110110101 1101111111 1110101111 1101101111 0100110101 1111111101 110111111 11111011001 0111001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 448
Words 88
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 351
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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