Analysis of Reflections

David Miller 1961 (New Castle, PA)



Standing at the mirror
She examines her aging face
She sees each line and wrinkle
Covering them in haste

Her appearance is not what it once was
Her age has taken over
The fear of this overwhelms her
Putting makeup on to cover

Her lover sees the girl he knows
He’s not looking at her flaws
She is amazed and speechless
He loves her, just because

We spend our days in cover mode
So worried about the surface
When deep inside is where it counts
The place where beauty is evident

We try so hard to keep our youth
It transcends every culture
In order to unlock this mystery
We only need, look deeper

Attraction is all relative
What do we seek to find?
The source of true beauty
Is a heart, loving and kind

In terms of love, God is the same
And much to our surprise
We are seen as perfect and complete
In our Father’s eyes

God loves us with our shortcomings
In His kingdom, we have a place
He wants to wrap us in His love
And surround us with His grace.


Scheme ABXX XAAA XCDC XDXX XAEA XFEF XGXG XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (63%)
Metre 101010 10100101 1111010 100101 0010111111 0111010 0111010 1011110 01010111 1110101 1101010 110101 111010101 11001010 11011111 011101100 111111101 10110010 0101011100 1101110 01011100 111111 011110 1011001 01111101 0111001 111101001 010101 11111010 01101101 11111011 0011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 941
Words 187
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by drmiller61 on May 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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