Analysis of Together Forever



I know you don't care,
But I'm lost somewhere.
Hoping you'll find my new path;
And we'll walk far together.

You act like you don't care,
But I'm always in there.
Stuck within you,
Like our souls intertwined.

When silences break,
And emotions flow like a lake,
We know we can't stay away,
As our paths are fused as one stack of hay.

Our souls braided together,
Our body weaved to complement the other,
Our lips made to just lock perfectly forever,
Till our end, we are knit together.


Scheme AAXB AAXX CCDD BBBB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11111 1111 1011111 0111010 111111 11101 1011 1101001 11001 00101101 1111101 11011111111 10110010 101011100010 1011111100010 1101111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 481
Words 89
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by Avonlea3 on April 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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