Analysis of Toxic love

Obed Daniels 1981 (GranadaHills)



In a blind world
There's a clearer vision
More vivid and detailed.
senses are heightened
Hearing,touch,taste, smell
Your intentions i felt
My relationship there
Left for dead
Without notice
Smells like dead corpse
In the morning
Makes me sick
to my stomach
But yet I stay
Hoping for a better day,
a better you,
a better me.
Im blind but I see
Toxic Relations


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Poetic Form
Metre 0011 101010 110001 10110 11 101011 10101 111 0110 1111 0010 111 1110 1111 1010101 0101 0101 11111 10010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 346
Words 66
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 287
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Modified on March 26, 2023

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Obed Daniels

My name is obed Daniels This is about me I had to learn as an adult as a child there were loving parents Integrity love respect To be caring Was what they taught. Although we weren’t rich We had plenty thanks to my father Who’s pockets were never empty One day my mother decided to leave my father I remember so vividly When she walked out that door I couldn’t understand What was happening I was playing Atari Eyes glued to the screen But my ears listening to them argue My mother said to me You don’t have to stay with your daddy If you want You can bring your Atari Like if that was a deal breaker Even though it was something I cared for It was my sisters and mother whom Needed me to look after To be continued more…

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