Analysis of ~ Even If ~



even if it doesn't make sense
as long as i don't write past tense
i've done what i've set out to do
write my heart out to you
guess who i'm writing about...
or maybe i've changed my mind
maybe i'm in doubt
i'll still say what i want cause it's all good
nothing can change my mood even if i could
today is a wonderfull feeling of high
nature is calling and i can't say why
have you ever had one of those days
when all the world is one big maze...
you want to explore all their is to do
to feel the sun shine down on you
catch a dream in your hands
walk on the beach touching the sand
climb a mountain to be part of the sky
and simply do nothing but sigh
smelling the roses instead of walking by
why can't it be like this everyday....
i guess everything has a reason and a purpose
to mark today...
i will stand tall, climb over the wall
play in the wind, i'll make that call
somethings up why i feel this way
but for sure i won't question it and ruin the day
so now it's time for me to go
i know i have to write some more


Scheme AABBCDCEEFFGGBBHIFFFJKJLLJJMN
Poetic Form
Metre 10111011 11111111 11111111 111111 1111001 1101111 10101 1111111111 10111110111 011011011 1011001111 111011111 11011111 1110111111 11011111 101011 11011001 1010111101 01011011 10010011101 111111101 111010100010 1101 111111001 10011111 1111111 1111110101001 11111111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 991
Words 214
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 777
Words per stanza (avg) 214
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Submitted on August 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Yvonne Sensing

I've been writing since I was a kid...I enjoy putting thoughts onto paper it's like clearing out my mind. I'm not saying I'm good, but I try. Still I write, but the thoughts in my head get jumbled and it all comes out wrong. I know what I want to say, I hope it comes out that way. Anyway, I still write maybe to leave a little piece of me behind. Not here to cause trouble or be a hero. I am a kind person with a big heart and I only do what makes me feel good. Poetry happens to make me very happy and joyful. Sharing my most inner thoughts makes me a target it seems, with folks that don't like me. I assure I am not a hater, but I will stand up for myself for what's right and true. This site has made me feel like were all family and here for each other not a place to bicker and fight among us, but to enjoy each others work with respect and love. Please understand I am not here to cause problems, I am here for the same reasons you are. more…

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