Analysis of Worthless Angel



She's so cute
and she cud be any0ne's dream chick
even mine too,
it hurts 2 c her addicted 2 dick,
she l0ves been his bedmate,
but i'd be happy makin her my s0ulmate
he uses her as a sex toy
and yet she feels on top of d w0rld as it gives her joy.
I reali admire her
but she cant just be mine
her smile puts me in dilemma
how i wish she wudn't b jst one of the other dime
she's c0me nd g0ne like d summer,
n0w my hearts c0ld nd fr0zen like d winter
like h0rses to begger
so is she 2 Rickyn0va.
N0 mata h0w hard i try,
she'll neva be mine so til summer c0mes again.
All i'll do is cry
and h0pe it cleanses my pain.


Scheme ABCBAADDEFGHEEEIJKJL
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 111 011110111 1011 11100101 111111 11110100111 11001011 01111111100111101 110010 111111 01110010 1111111110101 1111111110 110011111111110 11111 11111 1101100111 1101111101101 11111 0111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 594
Words 134
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 464
Words per stanza (avg) 134
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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