Analysis of world in peril



the world is in peril
a state of great dismay
we are filling up our air bubble
with poison gases every day
the faster we advance
with new technology
the sooner we will be begging
and praying on our knees
auto fumes and factory flames
keep filling up our skys
oceans polluted animals dying
acid rain blinding our eyes
societys engine roars
controling younger minds
we dont have a chance in hell
to even save one life
self destruction do to stupidity
seems to be the new world way
I just keep on hoping
we will live to see
just one more day


Scheme ABABCDEFGCEHIJKLDBEDB
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 011101 1110110110 110101001 010101 110100 01011110 0101101 10101001 1101101 1001010010 10110101 1101 1101 1110101 110111 1010110100 1110111 111110 11111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 518
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 436
Words per stanza (avg) 103
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Submitted on July 19, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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