Analysis of With You




O my love, my tangerine

Come closer to me

Hug and kiss with the awesome lips,

As your warmness

Is better than an old wine,

You are cosy and soft

Like petals of rose,

O my darling, my love

You are an ecstatic dose,

Together with you

And my arm on your shoulders

Is like mesmerizing moment,

And really sufficient for

All kinds of pain to circumvent,

On the advent of winter

And chill breeze around

Your soft warm body

Only make me feel sound,

I don't need heavens

When you are my near

You are my breath O my dear,

Just keep on promising

Your awesome presence

I don't need any thing

You are enough for my sustenance,

I beg to you

Never ditch me alone,

By God if you are gone

I am left to die alone,

In your love

I will kick this world,

If you promise to live for ever

My life will be valuable than gold,

I am just a cat's ugly mew

With you I am ever brave

Even when I die and go to the grave…..


Scheme X A B B X X X C X D X X X X E F A F X G G H I H I D J X J C X E X D K K
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11011 10110101 111 1101111 111001 11011 111011 1110101 01011 0111110 1110010 0100101 1111101 101110 01101 11110 101111 11110 11111 1111111 111100 11010 111101 110111100 1111 101101 111111 1111101 011 11111 111011110 111110011 11101101 1111101 1011101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 869
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 36
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on January 25, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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