Analysis of With You
O my love, my tangerine
Come closer to me
Hug and kiss with the awesome lips,
As your warmness
Is better than an old wine,
You are cosy and soft
Like petals of rose,
O my darling, my love
You are an ecstatic dose,
Together with you
And my arm on your shoulders
Is like mesmerizing moment,
And really sufficient for
All kinds of pain to circumvent,
On the advent of winter
And chill breeze around
Your soft warm body
Only make me feel sound,
I don't need heavens
When you are my near
You are my breath O my dear,
Just keep on promising
Your awesome presence
I don't need any thing
You are enough for my sustenance,
I beg to you
Never ditch me alone,
By God if you are gone
I am left to die alone,
In your love
I will kick this world,
If you promise to live for ever
My life will be valuable than gold,
I am just a cat's ugly mew
With you I am ever brave
Even when I die and go to the grave…..
Scheme | X A B B X X X C X D X X X X E F A F X G G H I H I D J X J C X E X D K K |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111101 11011 10110101 111 1101111 111001 11011 111011 1110101 01011 0111110 1110010 0100101 1111101 101110 01101 11110 101111 11110 11111 1111111 111100 11010 111101 110111100 1111 101101 111111 1111101 011 11111 111011110 111110011 11101101 1111101 1011101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 869 |
Words | 185 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 36 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 19 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 5 |
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Submitted on January 25, 2016
Modified on March 05, 2023
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