Analysis of When I Consider



When I Consider

My dearest love, when we two pass
The countless roses strewn upon
Our passion’s paths, so sweetly drawn,
My heart whispers, “Alas!”

When I consider, when years die,
How worms will waltz upon my lips,
Which yours in present bliss eclipse,
I cannot help but sigh.

And when I ponder how my skin,
Which your sweet tongue now glides across,
Will fall away, I mourn the loss
And think decay’s a sin.

Your beaming hazel eyes I love
Will follow nature’s course straight through,
And disappear in spite of you,
To see no more above.

Your russet tresses that I weave
My loving fingers fondly in,
Will one day grow quite pale and thin,
And so beauty bereave.

Our blood, which warms at every touch,
Will one day join the dust and grow
As cold as January snow,
And feel about as much.

And O, my darling girl, just think!
We’ll inescapably recline
In separate coffins carved of pine,
To test oblivion’s brink.

When I consider all these sorrows,
How tragic, fleeting Love and Life
Become amidst Death’s woe, Time’s strife,
I think of our tomorrows.

Yes, let’s love fully, kindly, truly,
And should Death and Time conspire
To douse our passion’s starry fire,
We may meet them duly!


Scheme A BXXB CDDC EFFE GHHG IEEI JKKJ LMML NOON PAAP
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11011111 01010101 101011101 111001 11010111 11110111 11010101 110111 01110111 11111101 11011101 010101 11010111 11010111 0010111 111101 11010111 11010100 11111101 011001 1011111001 11110101 1111001 010111 01110111 1010001 01010111 1111 110101110 11010101 01011111 1111001 111101010 01101010 1110101010 111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,167
Words 213
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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