Analysis of voisin (neighbor)
voisin
(neighbor)
elle joue les touches tintent
avec les coups de ses doigts
la musique remplit la cour
et je laisse laver sur moi
transporté à l'napa
vallée remplie de doux
vignes de la vie gouttes
humide d'une pluie de printemps
les dieux ont envoyé en forme,
dans leur sagesse pour bénir
les fruits avec leur jus
si doux et si âpre
comme son jeu
apaiser moi
écoute je l'ai entendue
réciter de la poésie
parlant à elle-même
énoncer mondes
je ne peux pas deviner à ses passions
je peux sentir ses désirs
me frapper subtilement
entre les yeux
et à nouveau de temps
transporté dans des mondes de plus de i
Mesopotamia, Europa
écoute dans sa doux musique
et elle ne m'a jamais charge
pour la balade
translated by ©anna lee /2014
author: GP
(guilty pleasure)
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Neighbor
(voisin)
She plays,
The keys tinkle
With the strokes,
Of her fingers
The music fills the courtyard
And I let it wash over me
Transported to the Napa
Valley filled with sweet
Vines of life dripping
Wet from a spring rain
The Gods have sent fit
In their wisdom to bless
The fruit with their juices
So sweet and yet so tart
Like her playing
Soothe me
Eavesdropping I her
recite poetry
Speaking to herself
Enunciating words
I can't guess to Her passions
I can feel her desires
Hit me subtly
Between the eyes
And I am again
Transported to Worlds older than I
Mesopotamia, Europa
I fly in her sweet words
And she never charges me
for the ride
poem for anna
by GP
Scheme | AB cd xefdddexdg he cdgd ddcd diFjhc gfb BA dxdd cgfcjxcddc jg bgxdddgd xiFdgc ff |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01 10 111101 111111 11111 1111011 01110 11111 11111 111110 1111011 111111 11111 11111 111 11 11111 111111 1111 11 11111110 111111 111 1011 1111 011111111 00100010 11111 1111011 111 0101101 101 1010 1 10 01 11 0110 101 1010 010101 01111101 0101010 10111 11110 11011 01111 011011 011110 110111 1010 11 1010 01100 10101 01001 1111010 1110010 11100 0101 01101 010111011 00100010 110011 0110101 101 10110 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,480 |
Words | 265 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 10, 2, 4, 4, 6, 4, 2, 4, 10, 2, 8, 6, 2 |
Lines Amount | 68 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 75 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
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Submitted on October 17, 2015
Modified on April 26, 2023
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