Analysis of torn-out-side in

J J 1980 (NC)



Soon past moving on,
          This river of scarlet pain.
Merely a portion left unspent,
          the only trace of him undrained.
Passionless about his ways,
          unseen his careless content.
Blind from woe,
          starving on the velvet bent.
Bleeding out his worth,
          his character exposed.
Thrown out to the wolves,
          bitten and unopposed.
Curdled his bloody wrasp,
          the crimson fog of his breath.
Restless whispers,
          ungraceful dance of death.


Scheme ABCCDCECFGHGIJKJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 1101101 10010101 0101111 10111 0111010 111 1010101 10111 110001 11101 10001 11101 0101111 1010 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 477
Words 67
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 330
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted by jasonj.74450 on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 23, 2023

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My friends call me JJ. I’m a word enthusiast. I enjoy the dance between adjectives, nouns and pronouns. I enjoy the rush of verbs, adverbs, and Intransitive verbs. I enjoy the metaphors that link worlds between figures of speech and Truthful dialogue. From disturbing acronyms to predicate adjectives. They keep my mind in this race of who is next on the totem pole of literature.is a face without a mouth, eyes without lids, ears without drums, and a brain without a mind. " please be kind and enjoy. Be mindful Not Malleable. more…

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