Analysis of Together We Share The Pain




In the Beginning I thought it was just a fling,
Than all this sh*t happened, and watched as
My life was torn apart. Year after year my thoughts,
And feelings kept getting stronger and stronger,
I Couldn't help but to realize how much I love you,
Even through all this Hurt and through all
This crap that this state has put us through
I still wanna be number 1 in your heart!
It hurts even kills me that we arent together, that
We arent able to exercise the rights we deserve
To stand united as Husband and wife the way it should
Have been. We didn't even have the oppurtunity to show the
World how in love we really are.  They stripped us of the right
Before we even realized how much we
Really loved eachother.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 697
Words 136
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 561
Words per stanza (avg) 137
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Submitted on June 30, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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