Analysis of Today is my B-day



I thank God for let me
see b-day.
I'm thank for that I'm alive.
People tell me I don't look
my age and that good thing.
I don't age like some woman
but I look good.
I want to live a long time on
this earth still God call me home.
Let me tell you this when my was with
my dad.My dad was 25 years old and my
mom was 28 year old when they meet.
Age got nothing to do with this.
And now I'm 29 year old thank he
that me see it.John God got it work
out for us belive it.God is there
he see you and me want to be
together.You have to have faith and
belive in him and you see it will work out.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMANOAPQ
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111 1111101 1011111 110111 1111110 1111 11110111 1111111 111111111 11111101 1111111 11101111 0111111 11111111 1111111 11101111 111110 1010111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 568
Words 135
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 438
Words per stanza (avg) 131
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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