Analysis of To Marianne, My Firstborn



My dear child, it seems only just yesterday,
That--in a dream, I saw this "special day"
Coming, and this little scene, now--reality:
You're not at home...living miles away,
And on the phone, one morning quite early,
I felt a divine and impelling sense to say--
"Your mom and I are thinking of you today...."
And with pen in hand, I wrote these words--
"The happiest mom and dad in all the world...."
Indeed, the day you came...and we are still,
And also grateful to God, and proud, as well,
Of the daughter that you are to us--an angel.
Now, listen with your heart, as I tell you why,
Everytime I think of the day you came, I cry.
Once, there were two worlds: your mom and I--
Far apart; now, there's only one--under one sky,
Because you came, one blessed night of July.
So, as you celebrate this special day--remember,
That we are with you--in joyful praise to God.
Have a "Happy Birthday, my dear child!"


Scheme AABABAACDEFGHHHHHIJK
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111110110 1001111101 1001101110 1111101 0101110110 1100101111 11011101101 011011111 01001010101 010111111 01010110111 101011111110 11011111111 10111011111 110111101 101111011011 011111111 111101101010 11111010111 10101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 887
Words 171
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 666
Words per stanza (avg) 166
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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