Analysis of To fathom this life disclosed



I feel a little funny,
maybe a bit crusty,
because of the whimsy feelings in my gut.

It's not very appealing
to experience what I've been seeing,
because it gives me queasy feeling in my gut.

To fathom this life disclosed.
Trouble comes repeatedly sometimes distorted,
because negativity invariably is stuck in a rut.

It's kind of stupid thinking of those yesterdays,
stumbling along this old track that lays
overgrown with moss, weeds, and wood-rot.

In contrast, I feel identical to this old railroad track,
and then how it sped us into the future...now we lack
all the morals, the virtues, and the love of the better sought.

What is this generation going to do...
forget the poor, the homeless?
My word, the Good Book says the poor wil be ceaseless,
I guess the military, the veteran, the disabled too...this burns my gut.

The thought comes to mind that civilization hasn't wrought
what my generation hoped for...but sure hasn't got.
I see the overgrown track, the moss, the weeds...
moreover I query, will they ever make the cut?

Well I'd better head back towards my home,
I've become a little to old to continue to roam,
haven't much family relationship...their to busy at life.

I don't mind being alone, but I worry for my children.
Seeing which direction the world is moving; what then?
I pray them welcome a better life than I have had; not strife.


Scheme AAB CCB XXB DDE FFG XXXB GEXB HHI XXI
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 100110 01101010011 1110010 1010011110 011111010011 1101101 101010001010 0101000100011001 11110101110 1000111111 01111011 01011010011111 011111010111 101001000110101 1110101011 0101010 110111011110 110100010000101111 0111110010101 11010111101 1100110101 0101101110101 1110110111 10101011101011 101100111011 111100111101110 1010100111011 111100101111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,327
Words 241
Sentences 20
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lucian Tower

I began writing Lyrics, short stories, and poetry some 43-years-ago. When I was in high school, during the 60s, I met the great Robert Frost. He spoke to me about my real elementary attempts at writing and poetry. He took some time with me, after assembly hall and told me to not stop writing. Now, that I have been around the world as a USMarine, and have lived through 2-years of the Vietnam War, I still am writing. Now at 63-years-old, I am enjoying being on Poetry.com with you all. I was born 12/21/1948, in Worcester, MA. There I began trying to write lyrics at 5-years-old, on my Grandmother's piano -- this has been a life-time ambition/Hobby for me. I live now in Gallatin, TN, and I am disabled/retired from the vietnam war.This is how I move around and, hopefully, meet others of like mind/spirit. I am mostly American Indian and 4th Generation Irish in the USA. My poetry are moments, which I've seen, and lived during my life. I believe allpoetry are photos, or glimpses into moments of life. Styles have changed over the years, and it is in reading/listening to others' poems that give poets ideas and imaginations to build their own style. This is who I am, as a man, who simply loves the written arts/preforming arts. Keep on writing!Lucian Tower. more…

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