Analysis of This Day Of Your Passing - 21 November 2011
This Day Of Your Passing
21 November 2011
We Love and miss you D., Diana, Mom, and Grammy
By Phillip Michael on behalf of your daughter Amy
21 November 2012
I've perished so much this year
Every second I stop
Suddenly I'm in tears
Constantly out of the corner of my eye
I swear I'm catching a glimpse of you passing by
I've tried to stand so strong
Just the way you'd want me too
But my life is crumbling before my eyes
And there is really nothing anyone can do
How did you always stay so strong
To the very last breath as you passed beyond
Rarely you wore you're pain on the outside
Me being the fiery one, I always just let it fly
But really Mom
No one knows I'm feeling insane on the inside
Can't ever seem to do enough
To override every waking moment of the pain
The pain of missing and not speaking with you
I still just can't grasp your really not home
But now… our home
Is a debauchery of pain
I can't run any farther from the crazy man who drastically changed
I can't quit on life, my family, Dad, Sheila, Fordy, Wilson, or Oliver
But I think if I really had the balls
I'd end sooner than later
Because sometimes I feel I can't stand another moment
Without being near ya
Again... I know I have a family to hold together
Just the way Dad was the bread and you were the butter
I just wanted to tell you how much I miss you
But no one can put it in the words
The way my self-proclaimed poet husband can do
God MOM!!!
I miss you Mom so much
Especially on...
This day of your passing - 21 November 2011
I Love You Always and Forever... You'll never be forgotten for making me who I am!
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| Metre | 111110 010 1101110101010 11010101111010 010 1101111 1001011 100101 10011010111 111100111101 111111 1011111 11111000111 01110101011 1111111 10101111101 1011111011 11001001111111 1101 111110011001 11011101 1101001010101 01110011011 1111111011 11101 10010011 11110101010111001 1111111001101101100 1111110101 1110110 01011111101010 011011 011111010011010 1011101010010 111011111111 111111001 011101101011 11 111111 0101 111110010 1111001011010101101111 10110110001001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 1,657 |
| Words | 329 |
| Sentences | 9 |
| Stanzas | 9 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 4, 31, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 43 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
| Words per line (avg) | 8 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 143 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
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Submitted on March 04, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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