Analysis of The Room, Grandfather, Lulu, and I



A small study lamb,
a tea cup with sharpened lead pencils
(number two),
 polished wooden panels:
walls dressed in masks
 (African vodun mugs).

An old stone fireplace with
portrait of colored girls
dancing above stained hardwood mantel.

Lulu, with a mind as dull as the room,
hung her thoughts out for scrutiny.
Shadows waltz in faint glow,
and smell send eyes searching
and minds speculating
about smudges on worn carpet.

From the door,
dark antique table stood smug,
on feline's legs, in a corner to the left.
Grandfather clock with pendulum,
a tongue that utters time.

A gem tells of certainty,
and minds were compelled and led captives,
but Lulu and her tactless wit
could never fathom why grandpa ran.

Grandfather ran when liberty summoned,
and this room expresses a life
that is far too deep for her to clutch.


Scheme XAXAXX XXX XBXCCX XXXXX BXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 011110110 101 101010 1101 10011 111101 101101 10011110 110111101 10111100 11011 011110 01100 0111110 101 1011011 1110010101 1011100 011101 0111100 010010110 1100101 11010111 101110010 01101001 111111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 789
Words 140
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 6, 5, 4, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Earle Francis Brown

I was born in Montego Bay, Jamaica. I was told that I can write, so I wrote and continues to write. I am currently living in Cincinnati, Ohio, USA. I enjoy reading "real" poetry. My favorite books are the Pslams, Proverbs and Songs of Solomon.Poetry is not just vocabulary, and use of metaphors and formats. Don't be tricked. Poetry should speak life. I love a poem that tells a story. The most memorable poems are the ones that tell someone's story. I don't care about ratings; the truth is always hated. People are people where-ever we go. more…

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