Analysis of Sifting Sand




I see another woman in my life,
 Sifting through my fingers like sand.
 Can I help her? Or will I push her away?
 I'm not a savior, but I would give anything to let her stay.
 I see myself helpless in her eyes, like a giant in a foreign land.
 Strong, but scared, not knowing where to turn.
 How do I touch her soul?
 How do I heal my heart?
 It scares me that I would lay my life down for someone,
 In exchange for just a smile and a loving touch.
 Wherever she may go and whenever I see her again…
 My hands are always here to hold the sifting sand.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101010011 10111011 11101111001 110101111101101 11110001101000101 111110111 111101 111111 111111111111 001110100101 010111001011001 11111110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 542
Words 112
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 411
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on March 26, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Robert Norman

Born and raised in Seattle. I started writing at 15 and never stopped. I am working on 4 books, 2 of which contain my poetry.You can read more of my writing at: http://templeofthedivinewind.blogspot.com/ more…

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