Analysis of Pure Bliss



My life begins to unwind
I'm looking for that perfect man
and you are the one i find
and I'll give you my hand
To wish that you could love me
would be worth the risk to tell you how i feel
standing alone wondering if its how i was meant to be
wondering if i tell u this how will you deal
Will you turn from me and just walk away
will you understand and stay
Will you be my friend and nothin more
will i have poured my heart out to be hurt once more
Will you hold me in your arms and wipe away my tears
or leave me standing with all my fears

Here I'am telling you how i feel
I'm even sealing it with a kiss
Please don't feel sorry for me in time my pain will heal
and for one split moment i was in pure bliss.


Scheme AXAXBCBCDDEEXX CFCF
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101 11011011 0110111 011111 1111111 11101111111 100110011111111 100111111111 1111101101 110101 111110101 111111111111 1111011010111 111101111 111101111 110101101 1111011011111 01111011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 691
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 14, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 77
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Submitted on June 13, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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