Analysis of On Reflection



ON REFLECTION
I think back to the days of yore,
Sledging out firewood using an axe and saw,
With our bush and those native trees,
Working early mornings with frosts we'd freeze.

There and back with each ton load,
Bringing it out and stacking by the road,
Spelling the horses every now and then,
Battling the elements again and again.

With hands frozen until after nine,
Splinters weren't noticed until the sun did shine,
Then you'd notice what had been done,
Working without gloves really wasn't fun.

Times were tough the work never stopped,
Dawn to dusk we'd go till we dropped,
Heavy that wood we handled it twice,
Onto the sledge and then stacked it nice

Five ton stacks all measured and split,
Yes we handled every single bit,
Through the mud with loads chained tight,
Determination and skill meant we'd got it right.

Day after day this was our lot,
Orders were met we worked at a trot,
Wind and rain made the work tough,

By the evening we'd really had enough.


Scheme AXXBB CCDD EEAA FFGG HHII JJK K
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 11110111 1110101101 110101101 1010101111 1011111 1011010101 10010100101 100010001001 111001101 11010010111 11101111 1001110101 10101101 11111111 101111011 100101111 11111001 1110100101 1011111 00100111111 110111101 100111101 1011011 1010110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 940
Words 174
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by RowAroundTheMoon on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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stan brierly

I have been writing poems for forty years and written about all sorts of things. Somehow I get creating streaks and can write up to 4 or 5 poems at once of varying subjects. I find it is a good way to record events of the day and bring history to life.The mental aspect is a balance against keeping fit,work and life in general. more…

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