Analysis of No visitor to allow



I open the window
Hate appears with ugly face to show
I push back and shut the door
It is cursing on the floor

I peep again to find
If new entry of any kind
There appears greed
Oh no, you can not be my need

I shut again and wait for visitor
Jealousy enters with her mentor
I can be your permanent savior
I shut the eyes as well as door

I have still anxiety to see more
Invite somebody else to explore
Beautiful fortune queen with wealthy outlook knocks
I realize her importance and take the fresh look

“Promise me good use of wealth”
She reminds of bad consequences with death
If misused the fortune or turned arrogant
I decided to allow her permanent

I found glorious mother of knowledge
“Sharp your weapon with edge” she told
I was impressed with her brilliance
“She must be allowed at once” I thought

I had powerful entrants in house
They are well established now with no grouse
I am still poor by any standard
I act for them and look forward

The house is in full order
Misfortunes and worries thereafter appeared never
I always look outside window
Smile now as there is no visitor to allow


Scheme AABB CCDD EBEB BBXX XXFF XXXX GGHH EEAX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 110010 101110111 1110101 1110101 110111 11101101 1011 11111111 1101011100 10010101 111110010 11011111 1110100111 01101101 10010111011 110001001011 1011111 1011110011 10101011100 1101010100 1110010110 11101111 11011010 111011111 111001001 1110101111 111111010 11110110 0110110 0100100100110 1111110 111111100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,074
Words 207
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on June 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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