Analysis of Never Thought It Would B e You



I never thought it would come to this,
I never imagined it ending in a mess,
Not the greatest foreseer could have seen,
Not the greatest fore-teller could have been,
Wise enough to predict that my traitor,
Would be my pal, my dearest confider,

Born and raised in the same village,
Guided and caned by the same village sticks,
Growing up together from that tender age,
We made the best comrades since age six,

Things we did both bad and good,
All these things did we, together,
This time mischievous next time mysterious,-
Stealing mangoes from the orchard:
Cheating mum we’re ill of fever,

And some times we were good boys too!
We slashed the grass and mopped the loo!
Many years came and went by and by,
Our friendship grew stronger each year and day,
I even have our kept souvenir,
For our good old days, together,

It is with joy that I recall,
Yet with much sadness I recoil,
With disappointment this I write.

Of all the people I’ve ever known,
In such a trouble as I got,
You were my one and only hope,
Yet I got your slash of the whip.

In an accident my dad untimely demised,
And so did mum when she got news,
I lost my job for I took a day off,
To lay the deceased and get off my grief,

I lost my home for I didn’t have finance,
To pay mortgage in time or advance,
My girlfriend couldn’t continue with a bankrupt,
All the rogues (my friends) vanished.

Such a trouble is as painful as can be
“But all hope is not gone for you have he”
And I had my dude in mind when this quoth I,
After all he had always been my ally.

At this point I counted on you,
Moral support alone could do,
But you were responsible for my state,
You were behind my daddy’s accident,

You were envious of his estate,
For your schemes my job I lost,
My girlfriend, I figured by you she’s brainwashed.
What more evil could one do to a friend?
Or in this case a ‘frienemy’, they hate?

You couldn’t stop at naught to see me derail
You leased my home and saw me to the street,
And you got audacity to mock me in my state,
You have betrayed me, my trust and hope,
So was Christ from one of His own!

Yet for you I pray in honesty and earnestly,
That your deeds be forgiven by God almighty.


Scheme XXXXAA XBXB CAXXA DDEXXA XXX FXGX CXXX HHXX IIEE DDJX JXXXJ XXJGF II
Poetic Form
Metre 110111111 110010110001 10101111 1010110111 1011011110 11111101 10100110 1001101101 10101011101 11011111 1111101 11111010 11100110100 10101010 10101110 01110111 11010101 101101101 10101101101 110110101 110111010 1111111 11110101 1010111 110101101 01010111 10110101 11111101 01100110101 01111111 1111111011 1100101111 1111111101 111001101 1110101010 1011110 10101110111 1111111111 01111011111 1011111110 11111011 10010111 1100100111 100111100 101001101 1111111 111101111 1110111101 10110111 1111111101 1111011101 0110100111011 110111101 11111111 1111101000100 111101011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,125
Words 422
Sentences 11
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 5, 6, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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FRANK odindo

My name is Frank Obongi Odindo from Kisumu, Kenya, East Africa. I have been writing poetry for over eight years now and I love it. Most of my poems are inspired by the world we live in and stories making headlines. I welcome all your views reviews and interviews. I would be glad if you rated my poems and this gives me a better chance to easily find and rate yours as well... Of the poems I have posted, my favourite ones are: "While All Slept" "verbal Pollution" "Me" "Christ Cares" "I Never Thought It Would Be You" How did you find them?I like: writing, reading,drawing,doing poems and socializing. more…

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