Analysis of My Trivial Cry-A Poem



This dark night holds eternal silence!
 As this long sky turned barren!
 Barren without a moon,
 Which could ornament the sky!

This black sky sounds still!
 As the clouds over here,
 Maintain a sad posture!
 O' my dear silver moon, where have you gone?

I am here, standing alone,
 Not noticed by any soul!
 This flowing tears of mine, could make a ocean!
 And am searching my tears that mixed with the ocean!

This cry of mine could make no difference!
 As no one ever bothered to notice it!
 I am here standing alone, lamenting!
 I am here awaiting the dawn to console my soul!

A Poem by Ayubkhan.U
source:http://ayubsfashionfusion.blogspot.in/2013/03/my-trivial-cry-poem.html


Scheme ABXX CXXX XDBB AXXD BC
Poetic Form
Metre 111101010 1111110 100101 1110001 11111 101101 010110 1111011111 1111001 1101101 11011111010 011011111010 1111111100 11110101101 1111001010 1110100111011 01011 11110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 709
Words 116
Sentences 18
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by ayub_k on August 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ayubkhan U

Hi this is Ayubkhan.U from Chennai-India. I am a Poet and Advertising Copywriter based at Chennai. I have written more than one hundred poems and posted the same in my various blogs. I am also a Softskill trainer specialized in Communication skill. I have written many Reviews, Short Stories and Children Stories and published in my various blogs. more…

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