Analysis of My Proposal
Hello, Pearl!
Oh Sorry! I misspelled 'GIRL'!
Words I spoke to you were a few.
Ah! Felt like a soak in a tank of dew!
There's no lack for songs on your beauty.
I made sure Aphrodite has no other duty!
Pardon me, to write on your smile I tried.
But everytime your name pops, even my pen coyed!
Just a look at you, my manhood spikes.
Tiny thoughts of yours, my poetry strikes!
Pour your shadow on me, my phobias vanish.
Pronounce my name once, my senses relish!
I want it, the warmth of lying on your lap.
I hate it, being far away with an inch gap!
Be next to me, to fill my adulthood.
All I want, is a sequel to motherhood!
To protect your feelings, my heart chambers are fasting.
With your tears of joy, I'll make spring everlasting!
You'll feel fulsome with love and ecstasy.
I'll make you happy, not a promise but prophecy!!
WILL YOU MARRY ME??
Scheme | AABB CCXC DDEE FFGG HHCC C |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011 1101011 11111001 1110100111 111111110 111010111010 1011111111 11011110111 10111111 1011111001 11111110010 0111111010 11101110111 111101011111 111111101 1111010110 1011101110110 11111111010 1110110100 1111010101100 11101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 826 |
Words | 163 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 107 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Submitted on August 02, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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