Analysis of My Love



I see you there, your pale disguise
Yet upon I stare, those charming eyes
The pains we share, now so clear
The comfort of knowing, my concious lair
The words we feel, so new, so real
Stengthens the heart, the love we feel

But to give in fully, to show whats near
Means killing our shame, our hate, our fear
To give in to the damage thats been
so i can hold you close my dear
Its time to change what has been seen
and dwell in the freedom of us

Coming back from my dreamy slumber
I look up from that gentle arm im under
i breathe in that sweet energy
filled with the love i feel so deeply
Pure love, without rejection
For the broken man, my reflection


Scheme AABXCC BBXBXX DDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 101111101 0111111 010110111 01111111 1010111 1110101101 110101101101 110101011 11111111 11111111 01001011 101111010 11111101110 11011100 110111110 1101010 101011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 633
Words 130
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Geni Kelepouris

I began writing when i was 16. I enjoy expressing myself through all forms of art ( my profile pic is one of my art pieces). I have had a life full of tragedies and suffer post traumatic stress. I find that art and writing soothes my soul and allows me to heal from all the pain that has been haunting me. I have an obsession with existence and love nothing more than to discuss all the different theories of why we are here. My poems cover a range of topics from love and inspiration to complete random mania. There are also some very deep poems that i needed to write to get the sorrow from my life. I just hope whoever is reading them enjoys them. more…

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