Analysis of Moonlit Chocolate



They're so obtuse but nice
Mints rolled in tundra ice
The night owls search for a tree
That they can set their weary
Wings and things hooting in the forest
On the night they love best

Fly little vampires fly
I guess you'll never know why
The werewolves threw a pie
At a golden cake moon
Happy Halloween
To the lonely raccoon

Gobblins build a pyramid
Wish I could be a kid
But we can bob for an apple
Or steal Kandy Korn from the ghoul
Family values gone up in smoke
The zombie's just awoke

Fly little vampires fly...

Someone  please answer the door
We know what they're here for
I see the drapes flow in fear
Or did a ghost just disappear?
The pumpkin is grinning on the sill
Feel the fires of Silent Hill

Fly little vampires fly...

Angela Garcia as NeonMosfet


Scheme aabbcx Dddexe ffxxgg D hhiijj D c
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 110101 0111101 1111110 10110010 101111 110101 1111011 01101 101011 1001 101001 110100 111101 11111110 1111101 100101101 01101 110101 111001 111111 1101101 1101101 010110101 10101101 110101 1001011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 734
Words 145
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 1, 6, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Angela Neon Garcia

Majored in Chemistry and Zoology at Miami University, Oxford Ohio. Wrote one scifi novel, Caviar Emptor, SyFy.com I have been writing poetry since 1973, Served in the United States Air Force 1974-1978, Served Army Reserve, 1980-1982 more…

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