Analysis of Meanderings of California Pollution (RemyLa Rhyme form)




Meanderings of California Pollution (RemyLa Rhyme form)

My golden bear yawns as the light shines
The landscape is pretty and newly made
The dawn of the dead permeates my fine musings
Ignoring all the roadway signs

Signs on the sea speak of issues
Which sprout quickly in my ever full head
The sad crimson offal that speaks of man's presence
Drives my poor eyes to seek tissues

Tissues wipe California
As painfully tears in my soul are cried
Thus laud to the skies as the people I admire
that grow the Capricornia

Capricornia in darkness
Will not grow largely at all it is known
I look to the desert and learn of its treason
It is a land of great starkness

Starkness is forever to try
On the foul landscape that's ravaged by time
It is an infinite battle of those not fair
I say unto you friend “Oh my”

©1/10/2013 by George W. Collett


Scheme X AXXA BXXB CXXC XXXX DXXD X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010010111 110111011 011100101 01101101110 0101011 11011110 1110011011 01101111110 1111111 11010 1100101111 111011010101 1101 1010 1111011111 111010011110 11011110 10101011 101111011 111100101111 11101111 1110010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 818
Words 155
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on August 22, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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George Collett

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