Analysis of Lorelei



I write to you, lover
Hoping to stay true
Knowing only you can script this tale.
I can only chronicle it, a by-stander in my own life.
An innocent caught in a drive by
Scattered amongst the victims of the past

You once said you could stop
Whenever you wanted to
Now, I wonder when that will be.
Am I wishing on an unfilled dream?
Does the future hold anything for us?
Or, am I to be content with guest appearances in your heart?


Scheme XAXXXX XAXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 10111 101011111 1110100101100111 110010011 1001010101 111111 0101101 11101111 111011011 101011011 1111110110100011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 424
Words 85
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 6
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 167
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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